All issues reported as of today (August 27, 2021) have been addressed. Thanks everyone! Below is the full report. This time, however, the updates are live on the main JoS site.
Keep in mind that I have been very meticulous in applying the updates. Suggested updates of content, like mantras, etc, are noted and will go through HP Hooded Cobra before being changed. I fixed all reported grammar mistakes, but I left many stylistic choices as they are unless I thought the change would significantly improve clarity. Most notably,
it is question of style as to whether a period goes inside the quotation of a single word or outside. (For example, on the JoS home page:
Satanism is not about "evil.") I personally prefer seeing the period outside because that is the rule for computer documentation where clarity is paramount, but the large amount of white space can look distracting, so the period usually goes inside for English writing.
-- Report of Edits --
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Healing.html
Changed "I had a heavy radio setting beside me" to "I had a heavy radio sitting beside me"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/HOME.html
Changed "prosyletize" to "proselytize".
Changed "firey" to "fiery".
Added a period after "Christianity Going".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Returning_Curses2.html
Set the title to "Returning Curses Part 2".
Added a period after "please read through RETURNING CURSES PART 1"
Remvoed the comma in "that HE has power over ALL witches that he said, “connect with our Gods.”"
Started a new paragraph at "When the Sun is rising".
Capitalized and added a period to "[make sure the moon is not void of course when you begin this working]".
Put the prayer at the bottom in italics.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satan.html
Replaced the low-resolution image with the better version and removed the link.
Added a bullet point before "He is the Sumerian God EA...".
Added a period after the sixth and eight bullet point sentences.
Added a period after "...Satan's Palace by John Martin"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/garden.html
Corrected the layout of "...rewards of meditation - working..."
Removed bracket before "Baal [Lord] Zebulon"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Planetary_Hours.html
Changed "21 (11 pm)" to "23 (11 pm)".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Circulating_Elements.html
Changed all trailing : to match the - which are the majority.
Added a period after "after circulating fire".
Added various other periods.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Chakra_Alignment.html
Fixed the font and spacing of various paragraphs.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Flame_Meditation.html
Fixed the small font of the second paragraph.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Soul_Energy.html
Added a space after the "..."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Rosary.html
Corrected many spelling mistakes.
Changed "�" to "©".
SUGGESTED UPDATE FOR HP COBRA: "Perhaps it should be stated that rosaries do not need 108 beads, that they can in fact have other numbers the user wishes to have."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Psychic_Centers.html
Fixed paragraph spacings.
Removed quote mark from "upon the exhale".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/OpeningChakras.html
Removed duplicate title.
Fixed paragraph layout at the bottom.
Removed the "Â" before the copyright.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Clairvoyance_Points.html
Fixed font of the first paragraph.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Yoga2.html
Added quote mark after "one thousand four..."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Void_Meditation.html
Removed comma from "Power meditation, strengthens our thoughts"
removed line break before "or "Say- Tahn- Nah- S-S-S-S."
SUGGESTED UPDATE FOR HP COBRA: "Perhaps, for the 3rd bullet in the list, it can include a little note to clean the aura after focusing on negative emotions for this exercise: The text currently is "Focus on a specific emotion- anger, happiness, sadness, love, hate. You can choose an emotion going by how you feel on a specific day. This is excellent training for advanced ritual.""
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Sound.html
Removed line break after "for psychic warfare."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Name_of_Satan.html
Removed line break before "Obviously sexual activity could not be prohibited"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/King_Queen.html
Corrected chinese characters in the middle of the vibrations. (This error only for non-Windows users. Now it's fixed for everyone.)
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Hypnosis.html
Removed "Š" from before the copyright.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Color.html
Major reworking of the text only using info that was already on the JoS. Lydia said: "Here is a corrected list of the Colors, including separated sections for use in black magick instead of grouped at the end or even middle of the rest of each text for colors; and including the negative properties of White which are listed elsewhere in the JoS."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Ascending_Energy.html
Removed line break before "60 cm"
NOTE: I did not change "bottoms of your feet" to "bottom of your feet" because I think it should be plural, since "feet" is plural (two), and each foot has a bottom. Feel free to say in more detail why you think the singular is better.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AURA.html
Fixed various paragraph spacings.
Added "with" before "powerful white-gold light"
Added quotation marks around the affirmations.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Odin.html
SUGGESTED UPDATE FOR HP COBRA: "In the runes page, it has some sentences about "Fa" rune, under Uruz's description. Wouldn't Fa be Fehu? Perhaps someone could look into the book quoted and see if there was a mistake or if it is indeed accurate. I don't see how Fa could be Uruz.
"When using Fa with another rune, it works to increase the power of any rune it is used with for good or ill. Adepts can combine the forces of Fa with the forces of Isa (fire and ice), but this could prove disastrous for the uninitiated. Green and shimmering gold work well with the energies of this rune.""
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Ball_of_Light_Meditation.html
Change the second paragraph's font to match the first page.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satans_Meditation.html
Moved the periods inside the parentheses.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Circulating_Energy.html
Moved the period inside the parentheses.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Necronomicon_Meditations.html
Removed line break in the first paragraph.
Added periods to the end of steps where it was missing.
Removed the dates in 2013 of when to do the workings.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_Watchtowers.html
Fixed paragraph 2's font.
Inserted a line before Set's sigil's paragraph.
Added a quotation mark and period after the vibration of THOTH.
Changed "Repeat steps 1 – 6" to "Repeat steps 1 – 5".
Added a period after the vibration of AMON.
Moved the period inside the brackets for the First Knot.
Added various periods.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Open_Blocked_Chakras.html
Added a line before the last bullet point in the first paragraph.
NOTE TO LYDIA: Are you sure YAUM is wrong for the Heart Chakra? It also says that on the Heart Chakra page.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Pineal_Meditation.html
Added a period after step 1.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Serpent_Meditation_One.html
Added a period after step 1.
Page: https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Star_of_Astaroth.html
Made the font match everywhere.
Fixed various periods.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Serpent_Meditation_II.html
Added a line between steps 1 and 2.
Page: https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Runic_Kabalah.html
Added a colon at the top.
Moved the reference to the bottom.
Page: https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Runes.html
Added a closing quotation mark to Example 1.
Corrected the steps 1,2,2 to steps 1,2,3 at the bottom.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Runic_Pronunciation.html
Added quotes around "father", "ooze", and "zebra" several times.
Added a closing parenthesie to "(An 'unvoiced consonant' for example is the English word "knight" the k, g and h are silent."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Breath_of_Fire.html
NOTE TO HP COBRA: Fix or remove broken YouTube video link.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Ujjayi.html
Added a period after step 2.
Page: https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/About_MKB.html
Fixed the font of paragraphs 2 and 3.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Freeing_the_Soul_2.html
Fixed the mind control link.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Invoking_Elements.html
Changed the all-capitals "High Blood Pressure" to lower case.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Invoking_Earth.html
Fixed "Reichsführer Heinrich Himmler"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Invoking_Water.html
Fixed "notice things others don’t see"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Invoking_Quintessence.html
Added a " before "Oliver Nicholson..."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Healing_2.html
Added a period after step 1.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/KeepingHealthy.html
Changed { to [
Changed : to ;
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Healing_Info.html
Moved the closing backet in the second paragraph.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_Hand_Chakras.html
Moved the period in step 2 inside the parentheses.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Magnum_Opus.html
Made a new paragraph out of "The Magnum Opus is physical and spiritual perfection and immortality."
Made a new paragraph out of "Demons who specialize in "metal-working" ..."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Step_2.html
Removed "(see technique #3)" because there is no technique #3 on the linked page.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/6th_Chakra.html
Removed parentheses at the bottom and turned the stray line break into its own paragraph.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Crown_Chakra.html
Removed duplicate title.
Added a comma in step 1.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_Throat_Chakra.html
Fixed font on paragraphs 2 and 3.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_Heart_Chakra.html
Fixed the whole page structure.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_Solar_Chakra.html
Fixed the font on steps 5, 6, and 7.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Opening_8_9_Chakras.html
Fixed the font at the bottom.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Wings_Meditation.html
Corrected "creat" to "create".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Human_Soul.html
Removed the comma before "[the ghost that takes on the image of the physical body]".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/The_Chakras.html
Added a line space underneath "most important and major part."
Added a quote and period at the end of the link to "Destroying Our Past"
Fixed various paragraph spacings.
Added a space before "Our being sealed has caused the human race to degenerate."
Added a period after "please click here."
Added commas to "The Four Quarters", The "Four Directions", and the Four Crowned Princes of Hell in rituals."
Added "and is the direction east" to the bullet points.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Sacral_Chakra.html
Added a title summary: "THE SECOND, THE SACRAL CHAKRA (SVADISTHANA)"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Basic_Meditation_Program.html
Changed the long dash to a regular short one.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/TRADITIONAL.html
Centered the pentagram at the top.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AUM.html
Added a period to the link at the end of the third paragraph.
Added a space in "again... corrupted" and "Another thing... nearly" and "They deleted a scene... Baroness Kessler"
Added a comma after 'LCF'
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Overcoming_Obstacles.html
NOTE: I did not put the periods outside the quotes because it is a valid English style either way.
Added commas in "Don't keep saying "I don't have any money", "I can't afford it", "I am broke", etc."
NOTE: When a quote ends with a question mark, no period is needed afterward.
Added a space and removed the comma after "wrong people… etc."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Fighting_Back.html
Moved the comma after "[three times is fine here, once you have it programmed into your aura]".
Moved the period inside "[Be sure to roll your R's.]"
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/hailtosatansvictory666/More_Info_Elements.html
Changed "[link below]" to "[link at the bottom]" to make it more clear.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Protecting_Yourself.html
Changed "and" to "an" and moved the period outside the following quote.
Added a period to 'I am successful in my job.'
Changed "haph-hazard" to "haphazard".
Changed "Confucius say" to "Confucius says" and added an ending quote mark.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Repeating_Magick.html
Added a space before several equals signs.
Reworded "Active experience is most important; not just theory, is the way one learns."
Fixed the JoS newsletter link.
Moved the period inside the brackets for "[The planetary above, comes from work done in past lives]."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Preparing_for_Meditation.html
NOTE: In the sentence "Adepts can often enter this state easily, by will alone, even in a hectic environment.", I think it is actually clearer to keep the comma before "by will alone" because it emphasizes that the trance is achieved without drugs or some bio-hack, but by sheer willpower.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Specific_Meditations.html
Removed the extra line under the title.
Correct "Evergy" to "Energy".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Determining_Trance.html
Added a comma in "...even though there is nothing there, or the operator suggests..."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Hypnotizing_Others.html
Added various missing closing quote marks.
Removed the comma in "...rid one's self of phobias, and bad habits, establishing good habits and so on."
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Brain.html
Added spacing before two paragraphs.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Amnesia.html
Added a line after the first paragraph.
Moved the period inside the parentheses of "(The CIA does this as well, although much has been kept from the public.)"
Removed the comma from "Luria (along with the CIA in later years)".
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Extra.html
Added a space between the last two paragraphs.
Page: https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONVII.html/
Removed the duplicate sigil for Ronove.
Page: https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Chakra_Alignment.html
Changed "spiritual your power" to "your spiritual power".
Page: https://web.archive.org/web/20150912180851/https://www.angelfire.com/hailtosatansvictory666/Repeating_Magick.html
Fixed "You cannot just idly repeat affirmations and let your mind wander. The drastically waters down anything you are trying to accomplish."
and "The focused mind is alike a laser."
Page: https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Power2.html
Two senetences reworded.
Page: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Exorcism_of_Emily_Rose.html
Fixed the tiny font in a paragraph.