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“Agares rules over the common people;
they are the voice of the common people and
residence of Hell.”
-This sentence doesn't make sense to me. I think this is supposed to be “
she is the voice of the common people and
residents of Hell.”
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“He
Gives true answers to questions, answers questions of things unknown, makes men witty, and teaches cunning and shrewdness. “
-I dont see why “Gives” is capitalized here.
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“He answers questions regarding private matters
[.]”
-Missing period where the "
[.]" is.
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“He provides good familiars, and teaches astronomy and the liberal sciences
, He can be sent to revenge secret enemies.”
-This comma should be changed to a period.
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“He can be sent to
revenge secret enemies”
-This sentence isn’t correct and is missing something. Some suggestions would be : “He can be sent to
(exact/get?) revenge
(on?) secret enemies”
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“He teaches astronomy, geometry, and everything concerned with measurement. He also teaches mathematics
[.]”
-Missing period where the "
[.]" is.
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“Element of
earth*”
-”Earth” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.
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“Andras Satan's Chief Guard and Head of Security*”
-I think something is missing here. I think it should be : "Andras [is?] Satan's Chief Guard and Head of Security"
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“He is said to be very dangerous
[.]”
-Missing period where the "
[.]" is.
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“Animal: Hell Hound/Wolf*
>”
-I think this is a broken “Line Break Element”.
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“Element of
: Fire and Air”
-Usually when more than one element is listed there is never a colon. It should be removed to stay consistent with the rest of the page.
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“Andromalius rules over 36 legions of spirits and is a
night Demon”
-”Night” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.
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“He will punish thieves and
avenge offenders.”
-I think one is supposed to avenge
victims not offenders, so to me this sentence doesn't make sense. I also wouldn’t write it in future tense.
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“Asmodeus carries the title "King of the Demons"
Asmodeus must be invoked bareheaded.
Asmodeus was of the order of Seraphim and he carries the title "King of the Demons." He governs the many realms of pleasure. He prefers to be summoned bareheaded [without a hat or head covering] and he teaches the arts of astronomy, arithmetic, geomancy, and craftsmanship.”
-There is no inherent mistake here, it's just that the same two things are repeated in 4 different sentences back to back, it's very repetitive and may not be intended.
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“Barbatos is a
day Demon and he governs 30 legions of spirits and is of the Order of Virtues”
-”Day” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.
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“Barbatos is a very handsome
god.”
-”God” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.
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“BATHIN, aka BATHYM, MARTHIM **Bathin is the Egyptian
goddess Nephthys”
-”Goddess” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.
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“He reconciles friends and enemies, and provides familiars
[.] He can assist one with job promotions and helps to gain a higher position.”
-Missing period where the "
[.]" is.
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While it does not offer translation and manually seeking definitions for words, it can be used together with other tools. Furthermore, Grammarly is not the only tool available and I recommend looking further into the subject.
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