Wayofthegods
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Stormblood said:Ramier108666 said:Ehh? I'm not following what happened. I thought you guys were ok with each other. Did something happen?! I bloody swear if that's the case when this war on this Earth is finalized and we are victorious, I'm tying you both up and leaving you two in each other's company for two hours. If you resist I'm recruiting Fancy Nancy or Ol Argedco Luciftius to help me.
It's simple all it takes is to read the two chapters and see how the character with my name is portrayed. He's going overboard with his repressed dislike of me and portraying my namesake as the village fool.
A character in a tale with my name portrayed that way... this is a psychological tactic, whether he is aware of it not, where you use a character as a proxy to make fun of them and, since tales appeal to the right hemisphere of the brain, this creates subconscious ties that will arouse the same preconceptions/prejudices that is building toward that character whenever someone reads my username. Sounds familiar?
This is defamation. Now, while some people here may respect me and everyone who has read me for some time already has formed an opinion of me, for better or worse (or neutral), newcomers still have a clean slate. You understand what that means, right?
This kind of behaviour will not be tolerated. If persistent, it will be taken care of.
What? Your character was designed to be Aries. You were meant to be funny. Who in my story has taken themselves very seriously? Lydia basically refers to the main 4 as a bunch of goofs that need her help. But then joins in with being funny as well.
Aries is very boisterous energy, but is the hardest warrior. Which is why Talgondon says, yes but he is the most dedicated warrior. In the upcoming war, is where Aries was going to shine.
I was going to show you as a war hero. Everyone's quirks, are what bring the team together. Things were about to get alot more serious, remember what your character said in the beginning, he has a tragic past.
Hes not an idiot. He buries down pain, focusing on the Adventure. He tries to lift everyone's spirits by never showing discomfort, as though hes not aware of reality.
The team in turn thinks about all the times he tried to motivate them, never giving any clues to his pain. But when the war hits, he snaps, and shows his pain. Thus the others growing closer to him.
Shannon fights for her town. Lydia, fights for alot of reasons. Shes a complicated Character, being of Balance, but as a Clue Lydia IS the Pineal Gland. Talgondon fights for Glory and Nobility. But like Taurus, he places everything upon the physical. Which in the end he attains his goals, but doesnt fulfill himself and realizes that traveling with his friends he made along the way, is what really drives him.
The characters are designed to have Ego flaws, that lead them no where. Ultimately showing them that the Family and travels is all that matters. That what they fight for, is their people and each other.
Notice Shannon is only ever sparked by people under her responsibility being caused harm. What is Sag? The fiery warrior that wishes to have no responsibility but is usually given it.
Ofcourse if I took a year and made a full book, I could make this have alot more detail.
But that's fine, I will erase you entirely.