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Wildfire said:
Lol you're gonna end up in my book as the stoic capricorn.
Be the guy who announces every town we visit. "And then we arrived."
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TalGonDon said:Stormblood said:
Sure, just wanted to say that expressing one's self in any form of art is something that is whole new dimension. Being SS is one form of art too.
Sunday New Release
Chapter Five
Aldrick woke and stretched out, the excitement of what was to come, washing over him. He crawled out of bed and walked over the door, slid it open and walked down the stairs. “Good Morning!” Said Storm Blood. The others were eating breakfast and talking with those who were staying in the inn. “This is another companion of ours, Aldrick” Said TalGodDon, while stuffing some croissants in his mouth.
“This here is Ambrosia, she is visiting the city from the town of Lunaria. “ The woman looked, smiled and said, “Nice to meet you, I have heard you got to visit the temple of the SUN, I so look forward to seeing it one day.”
“Yes, it was truly fantastic.” Said Aldrick. “Serpent is so luck to reside there.”Said Ambrosia. “I do look forward to when he will visit Lunaria.” Ardedco put on his pack and said, “It is nice to meet you, but it is time we head out, much to accomplish.” “It was nice meeting all of you, hopefully we shall see each other again.” Said Ambrosia. They thanked the Inn for its hospitality and ventured out into the sunlight.
They saddled up the Horses and headed out of the city. As they began their journey on the open road, Lydia looked over and said, “So what was your job in the temple Ardedco?””I worked directly under Master Slothz.” Said Ardedco. “He taught me how to create antidotes to their magick. The two scrolls you received, was from such work.”
“Wow.”Said Lydia. “I bet that was some interesting stuff.” “It took us a while.” Sighed Ardedco. “A couple of years of basically fighting them blind. Having to do everything the hard way. They really thrashed us around. Once we started to figure out what we were even dealing with, then we were able to make some impact. When we finally started defeating their magick, that is when it all payed off. But we never thought we would get this far. That we could take out all the source of their power, in one foul swoop. There is no time to waste, we must secure these Eleven Letters as soon as possible.”
The Team rode for a few hours, until they finally reached the gates of Veritas. “Okay, we should meet our contact here, at the Temple of Vesta. There the Priestess of Vesta, will brief us on what has been happening in her city.”Said Ardedco. They Approached a dark building, that seemed to shine like onyx. “There is no Denying it, that’s it.” Said Lydia. “We have arrived.” Said Ardedco.
They stationed their horses and walked to the main doors. Ardedco walked up and knocked three times. The doors slid open. They walked in to find a woman in the center, looking over a Large fire. “Welcome, Travelers, I am the Guardian of the people of Veritas. You May call me Shannon.” Said the Priestess.
“Greetings Shannon, We are here to make contact about your Rat infestation.” Said Ardedco. “I am glad you all have come.” Said Shannon. As she walked over and stood in front of the group. “I have tried to fight this Rat politically, but he keeps gaining power. I have tried using magick, but it was rendered futile, most attempts I have made. Commander Serpent informs me, that we have been trying to fight them the wrong way. That first we must reverse their power?”
“That is correct.” Said Lydia. “All my attempts to remove a Goblin from my village, were unsuccessful. Until these warriors here, minus Ardedco, Aided me, along with the help of two scrolls from Commander. Then we dispatched of him, rather easily.”
“Interesting.” Said Shannon. “Show me these scrolls.” Lydia and Aldrick pulled out their scrolls and handed them to shannon. “Mine disconnects them from their source of power.” Said Lydia. “Enough to remove their Cloak of looking human, Aldrick’s, Destroy their Protection shield, they place around themselves.” Shannon Looked in amazement, then said. “Oh this will come in handy big time!”
“We have been fighting them the wrong way!” Exclaimed Shannon. “All we would need to do is barge in there and reverse his Cloak, and everyone would see him for what he is!” “Exactly.” said Lydia. “We are here mainly for the scroll that he posses, we are to have Ardedco here examine it.”
“There is no time to waste.” Said Shannon. “We must go have a visit with this politician, his name is Reualtam. With these scrolls and our combined fighting prowess, I think we can take him out.” “Then lets hop too.” Said Aldrick, eager to take down another Goblin.
The Group of Warriors and two Priestess, headed out of the Temple and over to an officials building. They strode in to the building and up to a desk. “I am here to talk to Reualtam.” Said Shannon, with Authority. “Tell him the Priestess, would like to call a meeting with him. “Ofcourse, my lady.” Gulped the attendant.
Just as the man went to turn around, Reualtam walked through the doors. “look no further!” Exclaimed Reualtam. “I would of course would love to discuss business with the fine lady of Veritas. Should we do it over lunch?” “Lets go to your Office.” Smiled Shannon, while trying not to grimace. “Office it is!” Said Reualtam. “Whatever works best for you!”
They headed to his office and as soon as the door closed behind them, Shannon whispered. “Aldrick Take out his defenses.” Aldrick pulled out his scroll and chanted the words. Reualtam, walking over to his desk, turned around in shock, as his shield shivered visible to the eye and then vanished. “You destroyed my Shema Spell!” Yelled Reualtam.
“Thats right.” Said Lydia. “We know what you are.” Said Shannon. “We are here to destroy you.”The Mudslimes in the room started to head their way, as if to grab them. “Enough of this.” Sighed Egon. As he pulled out a Hellfire Wood, snapped it and threw it in their direction. “Everyone watch out!” Yelled Aldrick. They dove to the side, as the entire office exploded in Blue Flames. Completely incinerating the Mudslimes and blasting Reualtam over his desk and knocking him through the wall, and outside. They headed outside, where he picked himself off the ground. “Help me!” Yelled Reualtam. “These lunatics are trying to kill me!”
Some of the towns people turned and looked in surprise. As Reualtam ran around the back of the building, they chased him, until they cornered him. Lydia pulled out her scroll and chanted the words. Reualtam fell to ground, where he morphed into a Goblin. More Towns people, gasped and ran. “He has been exposed for what he is!” Said Shannon. As she walked over and put her sword to its throat, severing off his head. She then pulled out his scroll and tossed it too Lydia. “There you go Hun, mission successful.”
A man well dressed, walked around the Corner. “Tejas” He Muttered. The Goblins body erupted in flames. “Get them!” He exclaimed. Mudslimes surrounded them and grabbed them. “She has committed murder of an Official!” Said the man. As he walked over and whispered in Shannons ear. “When one falls, another takes their place.” Hissed the man. “Now we have grounds to get rid of you.”
“Get off of me!” Shannon Yelled. They were forced over into a prison cell. The man, called for attention of the people in town. “There has been a tragedy here!” Said the man. “Our Beloved High Priestess, has committed murder of the official Reualtam. She is imprisoned, where she shall meet sentencing.”
I saw it! Yelled a man in the crowd. “She blasted him right through that wall! He screamed for help, as she chased him down around the corner!” That man was making real progress in our city!” Yelled another. Until the crowd burst in anger. “Kill her!” They yelled. “Burn the witch!!”
They looked out a window in the prison at their town. “Has the city gone nuts!” Exclaimed Shannon. “We just helped destroy, a vicious Goblin, and they want me dead.”
“For too long!” Said the man. “We have lived under fear of these magick people. Now look at what comes of it? She strolls in with a team of warriors, like she owns the place, and outright kills one of her political opponents! All to further her own Agenda. So she Thinks, she can call him a Goblin.” Laughed the man. “As If he were wearing paint the whole time!” The crowd sneered. “How about we do away this era, once and for all? Lets take our vengeance on the temple! Remove the magick users from our presence!”
“What!” Screamed Shannon. “That’s it! We have to get out of here! My Vestal Servants are still in there. We have to do something!!”
“Shall we take the door and fight our way out of here?” Asked Lydia. “They took our weapons.” Said Talgondon. “Then lets show them, what magick users can do.” Said Lydia, Smiling at Shannon. Shannon, calmed her self. Then looked up with eyes on fire. “You’re right.”
Lydia and Shannon walked to the cell door. “Oss!” They yelled. The door exploded off its hinges and shattered into pieces. The footsteps of guards came pounding in their direction. “We fight our way out!” Yelled Shannon. They all ran out of the cell and down the hallway, where they were met by five guards. “Thurs!” Exclaimed Lydia. As lighting Blasted out of her palm and struck three of the men dead. “Isa.” Whispered Shannon. As the remaining two, had their arms slam to their sides. They hit the floor, suffocating from some invisible bonds. “Gather the weapons!” Said Storm Blood. They grabbed their swords from them.
The Team continued running through the halls. “We have to get that scroll back.” Said Ardedco. “Our Stuff, should be held in the weaponry of this place.” Said Egon. As more Guards ran around the Corner, Egon flicked his blade around, slashing one of their throats. As the Crash of steel, from the others ensued. They rounded another corner. “This is it!” Said Stormblood. Lydia Blasted the door open.
They went and gathered their things. “Oh of course he took the scroll! Yelled Ardedco. As they ran out of the room, they found themselves at the entrance door. Shannon Blasted the door open. Then strode out into the sunlight with pose. “They want a monster, I will give them one.” Said Shannon. As the others looked in shock. “Hagalaz!” Yelled Shannon. As the insides of the guards exploded, broken bones protruding from their skin. The men screamed out in pain.
She rounded her lips and blew. As fire erupted like a flame thrower from her mouth, engulfing more of them. “Saulo” She said. As a Bright light encased her like a shield, as arrows darted her way and bounced off of her. “Helios.” She breathed. As the light erupted, burning most of men into ashes.
“My Gods!” Exclaimed Talgondon. “Who are in Olympia.” Said Storm Blood, in wonder. “She is giving us a Hail Minerva Pass right out of this castle!” Exclaimed Aldrick. They approached the metal gate. Lydia flicked her wrist. “Azazel” she muttered. The Gate melted into a hot liquid pool. Shannon looked over impressed. “I was taught that one in the Temple of the SUN.” Said Lydia.
As they ran out of the castle. They came upon the Temple. Which was on fire, with a hole blasted on the side. “Were too late.” Exhaled Shannon.
Chapter Six
They rushed into the flames of the temple. “Help us!” Yelled out a lady. “We have to save my Vestals.” Said Shannon. They rushed to find a girl, trapped under a beam. Talgondon and Aldrick pushed it off of her. They found three others trapped in a room. Lydia Blasted the ruble away. “We have to get out of here!” Said Shannon. As the creaking sounds of timber were heard up above. They all rushed out, to find the man who did this, surrounded by a hundred mudslimes. “Tejas” He exclaimed. “Dive!” Yelled Stormblood. As they jumped out of the way, half the temple exploded into flames, with pieces of rock, flying in every direction.
“My, My” Said the man. “Our little traitors of the state, seem to have escaped. But now you get to witness your legacy, burn before your eyes. I think I like it better this way.” He began Laughing. “Now back to jail you all go.”
“I will slaughter all of you!” Screamed Shannon. “Oh dear, listen to the little livestock make noise.” Said the man. “Unfortunately for you, I mobilized the cities Army. They will be here any minute, to help me and my.” He looked around at the mudslimes. “Concerned Citizens. Of course you may slaughter most of them, before they get here. But how horrible that would look for you.”
“He has us.” Said Talgondon. “We have to retreat.” Said Lydia. “I cannot run away, not after they took everything from me!” Cried Shannon. “We live to fight another day.” Said Aldrick. “We have to retreat.” Agreed Egon. “These scum!!!” Shouted Stormblood. “You feces eater!”
The Man Laughed. “Quite a Delicacy. So is your insides though.”
“Alright, we regroup. You promise that you will help me?” Said Shannon. “Ofcourse.” Said Lydia. “We do not have a choice, we must secure back that scroll.” Said Ardedco. “Then lets get out of here, before we meet our fates.” Said Shannon. A donkey came walking beside them. “Hearth!” Exclaimed Shannon, as she hugged its neck. “This is my Familiar, everyone load your stuff on his back. Hearth Started braying from the attention.
They secured their things and began running through the city. “I know a place we can stay, that will be safe.” Said Shannon. “There is an Herbalist, I get my ingredients from. He will take us in. They ran up to a small Cottage, As they approached, a man opened the door. “Centralforce!” Exclaimed Shannon. “Hurry in.” Said Centralforce. Checking the coast was clear. They piled into his nicely furnished cottage.
“Thank you, Centralforce. Its just awful what has happened.” Said Shannon. “I have already heard.” Said Centralforce. As he hoisted up a piece of parchment for them all to see. It read OUTLAW Shannon, wanted Dead or Alive, Fifty Thousand Coin Bounty. “The entire city is looking for you.” He said.
The others looked in disbelief. As Shannon collapsed into an arm chair. “What are we going to do?” She Breathed.
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TalGonDon said:
Thanks Brother! ^ ^
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This is nice. I would've probably have commented "why not just put the guards to sleep with ISA whenever possibl, instead of killing them" if I were actually there XD Of course, that would only be about human guards, not goblins. I guess I just don't like excessive slaughter hahaha
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Well done Aldrick. This is perfect. Keep it up :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
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SdD said:
Trial 300.
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Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
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or you could post it on imgur, which never fails to work. Although, there you got to click on "get share links" and copy the forum one in order to get the correct version of the link.
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Aldrick said:Stormblood said:
The Story is so Latent with Allegories, once the Final Book is released, I wonder how many people can find all the Easter eggs.
Honestly, I might make a book of it. ( as in a physical copy, not sure what I'd do for the material of the cov but binding a book actually isn't that difficult. Just very time consuming. ) So far its very good. Keep up the good work Aldrick.
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Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
Sorry for not having a new release this week. With everything going on, I havent been able to gather my inspiration. I know how the story will go, but tying in the details, takes alot of thought. Also, I cannot just think myself there. I have to be driven there with Inspiration.
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Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
Sorry for not having a new release this week. With everything going on, I havent been able to gather my inspiration. I know how the story will go, but tying in the details, takes alot of thought. Also, I cannot just think myself there. I have to be driven there with Inspiration.
So what will give you inspiration? I write as a hobby, so if you want I can maybe help.
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Can't rush perfection. And so far you've been perfect with it all.Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
Sorry for not having a new release this week. With everything going on, I havent been able to gather my inspiration. I know how the story will go, but tying in the details, takes alot of thought. Also, I cannot just think myself there. I have to be driven there with Inspiration.
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Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
Sorry for not having a new release this week. With everything going on, I havent been able to gather my inspiration. I know how the story will go, but tying in the details, takes alot of thought. Also, I cannot just think myself there. I have to be driven there with Inspiration.
Make an invocation to the nine muses for them to help you.
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I really love these stories they are very well done and entertaining. It's jard to find entertainment that is Satanic these days. Great jobAldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
Sorry for not having a new release this week. With everything going on, I havent been able to gather my inspiration. I know how the story will go, but tying in the details, takes alot of thought. Also, I cannot just think myself there. I have to be driven there with Inspiration.
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Ramier108666 said:
It's more like it will feel like a chore. Then all of a sudden, I just go on this adventure in my mind. It becomes fun. Everything sorta connects. It will kick in here pretty soon. The weeks just keep flying by.
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mercury_wisdom said:I really love these stories they are very well done and entertaining. It's jard to find entertainment that is Satanic these days. Great jobAldrick said:
Thank you mercury! I like to think of it as, were all out doing something together. Since we cant really have friends or go anywhere. We can adventure together on the Astral plane.
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Ol argedco luciftias said:Press "preview" instead of "submit" so you can see if it works.Aldrick said:
Trial 300.
You need to right click the image, or hold your finger on it if it's on a phone. Then click "copy image address" or "copy image location" some option like that should come up. You need the link that goes directly to only the image, but you are trying to use a link to a bigger page with other things on it not just the image.
Like if you right click on an image and click "view image" it takes you to another page where that picture is the only thing on the page. That's the link you need.
I figured out what the problem is. So Mercury was in Pisces, and it was really helping me be imaginative and go into another world. Last weekend, It went into Aries. Ever Since I have not be able to concentrate or have an imagination. It goes into Tarus on April 28th, which is one of the best signs for concentration. Also the Sun goes into Taurus on April 20th. So this sunday is the last time to do a sun square while the sun is exalted.
So end of April, both the sun and Mercury will be in Taurus. I will be able to concentrate and work more on this story then. Until then with Aries sun and mercury, in few days moon as well. YIKES!
I just cant concentrate right now. lol
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Sounds good
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Aldrick said:
So, is there any way I can contact you? I want to share with you the current look of book... wow this sounds .. LOL. Anyways, I kinda wanted to create the symbol for Brotherhood of Blood, and since this is your book and your story, I think you need to decide what the whole thing should like. I already finished Lydia's Book cover .. now I'm just waiting for her to complete the book.
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TalGonDon said:
Το πληκτρολόγιό μου άλλαξε στα Ελληνικά. Δεν μπορώ να αλλάξω πιο.
Χαχαχαχαχαχα
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Ol argedco luciftias said:Sounds good
Mercury is 0 Degrees Taurus now. Doesnt that feel alot better? I suddenly can think and concentrate. I dont feel like biting peoples head off over nothing. I can see myself writing some more. Instead of just thinking of writing and going Into mental lock down. Grabbing my head and then destroying the laptop.
Its...silent. That's nicccee.
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I was wondering why it just got easier to learn more things.Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Sounds good
Mercury is 0 Degrees Taurus now. Doesnt that feel alot better? I suddenly can think and concentrate. I dont feel like biting peoples head off over nothing. I can see myself writing some more. Instead of just thinking of writing and going Into mental lock down. Grabbing my head and then destroying the laptop.
Its...silent. That's nicccee.
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Ol argedco luciftias said:I was wondering why it just got easier to learn more things.Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Sounds good
Mercury is 0 Degrees Taurus now. Doesnt that feel alot better? I suddenly can think and concentrate. I dont feel like biting peoples head off over nothing. I can see myself writing some more. Instead of just thinking of writing and going Into mental lock down. Grabbing my head and then destroying the laptop.
Its...silent. That's nicccee.
So talgondon emailed me the cover. I thought he wanted me to like pick from designs. But he was just showing.
WOW. I was like that is fricken cool.
Not just saying that. My eyes got wide and I got excited.
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Ol argedco luciftias said:I was wondering why it just got easier to learn more things.Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Sounds good
Mercury is 0 Degrees Taurus now. Doesnt that feel alot better? I suddenly can think and concentrate. I dont feel like biting peoples head off over nothing. I can see myself writing some more. Instead of just thinking of writing and going Into mental lock down. Grabbing my head and then destroying the laptop.
Its...silent. That's nicccee.
New Release. Was gonna release yesterday, but storms knocked out my power. I didn't think I was gonna be able to send today, but I got a small opening.
EnjoyChapter Seven
Lydia walked over to one of the Vestals. “Is your arm hurt?”asked Lydia. “It got crushed when I was in the temple” Replied the Vestal. “Vin” Breathed Lydia. Her arm instantly healed up almost to normal. “Thank you Priestess! Said the Vestal. As Shannon was slouched into the chair, she looked at Lydia and her Vestal Talk. “We must plan our next course of action.” Said Shannon. “Firs things first, we need to get my Vestals out of this town, they no longer can stay here. I want to give them to you Lydia.”
Lydia looked in complete shock at Shannon. “I couldn’t.” Said Lydia. “If they go to your temple in Demonia, there they can be of use to your city, in your absence, and they cannot stay here. Replied Shannon. “She does make a really good point.” Said TALGONDON. “Okay, I guess you are right, you make a good point. Said Lydia. “It is decided then.” Said Shannon, standing up from the chair. She walked over to the Remaining Vestals. “Take Hearth and go to Demonia. Maintain the Temple of Athena, for Priestess Lydia.” “Ofcourse my Lady.” Replied a Vestal.
They then walked outside and went on their way. “Now, what is your next course of action shannon?” Asked Central Force. “Okay now we need to let Commander Serpent know that our Mission was a failure and what the current situation is.” Said Shannon. “ Lydia can you send your owl Sophia to deliver a Message to the Temple of the SUN?” “Ofcourse.” Said Lydia. Shannon walked over to a small desk, and took out a piece of parchment and a quill, dipped the quill in a bottle of ink and began writing out a letter. Once she was done, She Rolled the letter up and walked across the room and handed it to Lydia. Lydia then attached the letter to the leg of the owl. “Fly quickly my dear, this message must reach him as soon as possible.” Said Lydia.
The owl understanding the mission, then flew off of her arm and out the window. “Excellent.” Said Ardedco. “What now?” Suddenly a loud banging began on the front door. “Oh I know this one!” Said Stormblood. “Next we answer the door.” Shannon looked over at Stormblood. “Is he always like this?” She asked. “Incurably soo.” Said Egon. “A Fearless warrior though. Said Talgondon. The banging continued. “You all need to hide.” Whispered Central Force.
“Hide?” Asked Shannon. “The Priestess of Vesta doesnt hide!” Shannon walked over to the door and swung it open. There outside the door, stood three guards. “Shannon!” Exclaimed on of the Guards. “Ramier?!” Said Shannon in shock. “Thats her!” Said one of the other guards. The two pushed themselves into the house and grabbed Shannon. “What are you doing Ramier?!” Yelled Shannon. “My Duty.” Replied Ramier. As he walked into the house. A massive muscular Guard with thick armor. “You are an outlaw and we are here to arrest you.”
“Now come with us, without a fight, or this will get ugly.” “Ramier you traitor!” Said Shannon. “Bring her.” Said Ramier. The two Guards pulled Shannon and began to walk out the door with her. “What fools, that you think you can come and just take us.” Said Lydia. “We are…” But she was cut off, as Ramier grabbed the two guards by the head, and slammed them together, knocking them both out. Then Walked over and closed the door. “What do you think of my acting skills?” Said Ramier.
Shannon sighed in relief. “You convinced even me.” Said Shannon. “Everyone this is my friend I thought was about to be in a death battle with, Ramier.” “Hello Everyone.” Said Ramier. “Thank the Gods.” SaId Egon. “I thought I was about to have to throw Talgondon at him as a shield.” “Wait what!?” Said Talgondon.
“We have to get you out of the city.” Said Ramier. “It wont take them long to learn this patrol got taken out, they have mobilized the cities whole army to find you, the walls are shut and the city is on lockdown.” “Lock Downs Suck.” Said Stormblood. “I have lived in one of those before.” “I can sneak you all out of the city, there is a hidden access point, that is used by the Guards.” Said Ramier. “Lets get this armor off of these two guards, and have Shannon and Lydia wear it. The rest can be our Prisoners, and they wont think magick users.”
“Thats a great plan!” Said Lydia. “Well centralforce, it looks like you will need to come with us.” Said Shannon. “Damnit Shannon!” Said Central Force. “You mean I am going to have to leave my easy life, of sitting here, handing out herbs, to go travel with you lot, to the Temple of the SUN, on some Holy mission from the Gods?” As he smiled. “I know, sorry for the bother.” Said Shannon. “I mean you could stay here and be a prisoner instead. That might be even better.” They Smiled at each other.
Ramier led the group out of the House and walked to a stone wall, there he opened a secret door and they walked in. They traversed the Hall way inside the wall. Some Guards walked past and simply nodded. Then they got to another hidden door, and appeared outside of the city walls. “Now we just have to walk, all the way there…”Said Lydia “Hey Lydia gets to walk some where with us!” Exlcaimed Talgondon. The others looked at him. “Did I just have a Storm Blood moment?” “Onward we march like Spartans on a mission!” Said Stormblood. Lydia and Shannon looked at each other. As they took off their Helmets and dropped them to the ground.
“Alright, well lets use those good ole leg ponies.” Said Aldrick. “We have some of those!” Exclaimed Stormblood. “That means walk….” Said Aldrick. “Darnit!” Said Stormblood. The team then began their march. After an hour, A team of horses were heard coming their way. “What now?” Asked egon. “Wait, those are Pandemonium Troops.” Said Lydia. The team stopped and waited for them to approach. “Thats Lydia!” Yelled a Guard. The Troops came up to the group. “Lydia what are you doing out here?” Asked a Guard. “Oh you know.” Said Lydia. “Just hangin with my posse.” Talgondon and Egon looked over at Lydia in confusion. “I told you I don’t write my jokes!” Exclaimed Lydia.
“I helped them to escape out a secret guard entrance.” Said Ramier. “Well there goes our Rescue mission.” Laughed the Guard. “Here we have some extra horses, let us escort you to the city.” Stormblood jumped on to his horse. “Leg ponies!” Exclaimed Stormblood. “I knew you would save us!” “Must be what Posses call Horses.” Said a Guard to another guard. “Oh!” Said the other guard. The lot of them were then escorted back to the city of pandemonium. They strode up to the Temple of the SUN and walked through the front doors. Sophia flew across the room and landed on Lydias shoulder. “Sophia!” Exclaimed Lydia Happily.
Commander Serpent strode up to them. “Thank the Gods you are safe.” Said Serpent. “We have learned more since your last visit.” Master Sloth peered out of the door of the Library. “Yes It seems my studies have been concluded.” Said Master Sloth. As he tripped on some books and tumbled out in main room. Then he got up and brushed himself off. “So it seems the origins of the Goblins go deeper then any of us would have expected. Apparently they are Reptilian Hybrids. Their True masters being fully Reptilian, had their slaves, A type of Borg, mix their DNA with that of a humans, creating Goblins”
“Thats horrible!” Said Ardedco. “No wonder they are so vile.” “Yes.” Said Sloth. As everyone looked at each other in disbelief. “Now they have a head Reptilian, his name is Meholeh. It appears he is in possession of the other 11 letters. He and the Goblin were suppose to rendezvous, on this next upcoming planetary alignment, where they were to combine the two halves, and recite all 22 letters together, thus summoning their God. The Leviathan, a Giant Black Dragon, who will devour and destroy all of the land.”
“And now they have the city under lockdown by force of the Army!” Yelled Shannon. “So they will keep everyone out, while they invite the Overlord Reptilian and summon their God, IN MY CITY!” “Precisely.” Said Sloth. “I am sorry we failed you.” Said Lydia. “Well thats only half, of what I learned.” Chimed Sloth. “If we can go in and take the 22 letters from them, and reverse them, we then destroy their God and all their power forever. We are also in command of one of the largest and most powerful Armies in the land. But then it gets better.”
“Even better?” asked Ramier. “Are any of you aware of the Legend of the SUN?” Asked Sloth. “Yes.” Spoke Aldrick. “When 12 warriors align together, they are able to awaken the SUN. From what Serpent told me, it may happen right…..here.” “Yes.” Said Sloth. As he looked at the group. Lydia sudden paused and looked around the room. “Wait..” She breathed. “The first four, Stormblood, Talgondon, Egon and Aldrick, then Serpent is leo, Ardedco said he takes care of the details, Virgo and then I’m Libra, Ramier is the one who was clouded in betrayal, Scorpio, Shannon is the flame and the warriror, Saggittarrius, Central force is the quiet hard worker, Capricorn, and Sloth is the Wise one, Aquarius. But were missing Pisces.”
“Very good!” Said Sloth. “But we have Pisces here as well. Are you aware of what the Triumvirate is?” Asked Sloth. “No.” Replied Lydia. Serpent Chimed in. “The Triumvirate are the three leaders of this temple and this city. Myself who is in control of the Army as General, Master Sloth who is in charge of the Library and knowledge, and the Oracle of Delphi, The one who channels Apollo, The God of the SUN.”
“Pisces.” Said Sloth.
Chapter 8
“She is in the highest chamber of the Temple.” Said Serpent. “My Highest informant of course.” Said Sloth. “We should go to her now.” Said Serpent. They followed Master Sloth and Commander Serpent up the stairs. Serpent winded up the stairs till he got to the top. Then he knocked three times on a large wooden door. A Guard opened the door and let them in. They walked into a very elegant room. In the middle was a fountain, where Three streams of water sprouted out and converged back into one. A woman in a Golden Shining robe walked over to them. “Hello.” Said the Woman. “This is the Oracle of Delphi, Madame Maxine.” Said Serpent.
“Good to meet all of you.” Said Madame Maxine. “Today we shall lift the veil.” She walked over to a giant golden sarcophagus that stood up straight. “Here hopefully we can resurrect His Spirit from the Grave, so the world may know his Truth.” The Group looked at each in confusion. “The SUN is Ramses the second.” Said Sloth. Everyone jumped in surprise. “We are going to bring him back?!” Asked Aldrick. “That’s the plan.” Said Sloth.
“Everyone stand in a circle around the sarcophagus.” Said Madame Maxine. Everyone stood in a circle in their given signs order. “In the Almighty Name of Apollo! We beseech the powers of the Gods!!” Exclaimed Madame Maxine. “ In the Almighty name of Pan! May his chosen SUN come forward! To reclaim the Kingdom that was stolen from him!!”
“Now everyone chant ODAL.” Said Madame Maxine. Everyone began chanting. ODAL, ODAL, ODAL, ODAL, ODAL!!! The room felt as though it began to spin. An electrifying force entered the air. Above the Temple lightening began to flash. They looked up as they heard the thunder. From an opening in the ceiling, lighting shot into the temple and hit the fountain. Part of it went and hit Lydia, knocking her to the floor. Serpent walked over, and picked her up to her feet. “Wake up Lydia.” Said Serpent. He carefully shook her, and she woke back up.
“Are you alright?” Said Serpent. “Yes.” Said Lydia.”Just a little shaken.” Serpent walked back to his spot. As the lid of the sarcophagus slid open. Talgondons eyes widened. Inside was a portal that was blazing with light. Out of the Blinding Light, stepped out a Man, clothed in Egyptian Pharoh clothes. He strode up to The Priestess of Delphi. As the Lid closed back behind him.
“Hes Back.” Gasped Madame Maxine.
“Good Afternoon.” Said Ramses. As he walked over to Maxine. “Thank you for your help in bringing me back to this world.” He then walked over to Commander Serpent and Master Sloth. “So, I have seen that which is going on, they will not tolerate peace, we have no choice but to give them war. Will you ready our army?” “Certainly.” Said Serpent. As he walked over to a guard and gave him an order. “Hello, my warriors.” Said Ramses. As he approached the rest. “You have come far to reach here, as was the will of the Gods. Are you ready for the Battle of Battles?”
“We are ready!” Said Lydia with confidence. “Just let me at them!” Said Stormblood. “I must take back my city.” Said Shannon. “The Battle for Veritas.” Said Ramses. “The battle for Truth.” The marching sound of foot steps could be heard outside in the city. They all walked to the corner of the room, where there was two large doors, that were opened up to a balcony, that looked over the city. They walked out onto the Balcony and looked out onto the city. The Marching Army came to a halt right in front of the temple. As well as the citizens of Pandemonium came and gathered. It was a huge crowd, people in every direction.
Serpent walked out into view of the people. “Ansuz.” He muttered. Casting a spell that would magnify the voice of anyone who spoke on the balcony by a thousand times or more. “People of Pandemonium!.”Spoke Serpent. The crowds looked up attentively to listen. “We have before us a battle! A Battle of extreme importance to all! But first I have news. Our Leader! Ramses the Second, has returned to us!! To Lead us in this triumphant battle!”
The Crowds looked on in shock, as Ramses then strode to the front where Serpent Stood. The Crowds began to scream in excitement. Then Ramses began to speak.
“The Decision is now, BE IT WAR OR PEACE. The Goblins can either give us our freedom, or we now go and GET IT FOR OURSELVES!! Now I march before my people as the FIRST OF ITS SOLDIERS! And behind me, let it be known to the world, Marches a people, a people that is different from others!”
“And today I IMPLORE YOU, my people, STAND BEHIND ME!! Man by Man, Woman by Woman! We must all Sacrifice what we can. For only then, when this entire people, becomes a united community of sacrifice, then can we expect, can we hope, that the Gods will grant us assistance in our endeavors. Pan has never helped a LAZY MAN!! He does not help the Coward, He does not help a people that cannot help themselves. Here the same principles apply, People HELP YOURSELVES!! Then the ALMIGHTY PAN HIMSELF cannot deny you his assistance!!”
The Crowds began to roar. Then chanting began. HAIL RAMSES! HAIL RAMSES! HAIL RAMSES!
“With this new people, we shall forge A NEW COMMUNITY. That was the task, we once undertook thousands of years ago, the task that is much clearer to us now then it was before. I will return after this war, again with my old teachings, whose realizations seem more important to me now, then perhaps it did back then. Theses realizations, which brought me here today. We have again the opportunity, to exercise the spirit of this community.”
“There is no way of repaying the front for its sacrifices. But the accomplishments of the homeland will likewise stand the test of History. It is necessary, that the soldier upon the front must know, that everyone who stays behind, will be taken care of. That it will take care of him to the best of its abilities. That he must know. That is how it must be, so that later the homeland, can be mentioned in relationship to the great achievements upon the front.”
“EVERYONE KNOWS WHAT THEY MUST DO IN THIS TIME!! Every woman, every man-THEY KNOW. What is rightfully asked of them!! What they are obliged to give. If at any time!! You are walking the streets, and should have any doubts, whether you should give something more, then turn your gaze sideways and perhaps you will see. Someone who has given so much more for Pandemonium then you have!!”
The crowds erupted into praise.
“It is my belief, that this imposes upon us only one duty-namely. To strive to further our ideals. We must realize one thing clearly! When this war is over, it is the soldier of Pandemonium who will have won it! Who has come from the farms and trades. Who truly represent the mass of our people! It will have been won by the Home front. By the Millions of men and women, the workers and Farmers! It will have been won by the creative men in the offices and professions. All of these Active people. They will have won it!”
“For all of these people, THEY MUST KNOW! That this new state will be built for them! TODAY! WE GO FORTH TO THE FRONT!! And you will see, how this armed force, becomes more and more to our ideals. How they will take on more and more of the imprint of our new state. How all Privileges and class prejudices are being Eliminated more and more. I shall be there to witness it, as I too shall go to the front, to lead my men. For I have come out of you my people. At the end of this war, our community of a new people, will have proven itself most in this war. That is what distinguishes the new Pandemonium that will be created from that of before.”
“This we owe to the immeasurable heroism of the Front. The Heroism of the iron Soldiers, known and unknown. What is being achieved here, on the battlefield and in the city. By men and above all by the innumerable Women, it is tremendous. I have not talked to those, of my own people, in so long! All I can say for such a speech, is one thing.”
“THINK-INCESSANTLY-MEN AND WOMEN. That in this war, it will decide the TO BE OR NOT TO BE of our people!!”
“For when you understand that. Then everyone of your thoughts and everyone of your actions, all of that will be one single prayer, for not only Pandemonium, but to all the cities, of those who stand for the Gods of Truth!!!”
“How Fitting that this war shall take place in the city of Veritas, the City of Truth. For now that my Spirit has risen from the Grave, the battle for Truth begins again, and the TRUTH IS ON OUR SIDE!!”
The Crowds cheered loudly.
“In the end, we must have one understanding, WE SHALL NEVER SURRENDER!!!!!”
Ramses then walked away from the edge and the crowd exploded into praise. Serpent then walked back to the masses.
“They send their massive armies ahead!” Boomed Serpent. “Today our troops fight deep into enemy territory! The Fight for our existence nears its dramatic Climax! It is not just a battle for the freedom and security of pandemonium!! Instead a gigantic confrontation about the future fate of all our people!! ON THIS DAY, WE SHOW THEM WHAT THE POWERS OF HELL ARE CAPABLE OF!!!!”
SOLDIERS!! MARCH!! FORWARD!!!!!!
The soldiers lifted their spears and yelled in anger. It was an explosion of voices that made the earth itself shake. The fury and the might of the people, became something beyond formidable. The Enormous Army joined by civilians then began pouring out of the city. As Commander Serpent stood looking over the crowd.
The war had Begun…..
Wayofthegods
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TalGonDon said:
Since it's a short story. I'm just gonna get to the action.
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Aldrick said:
Did you choke on your pride when you thanked me in the other topic about the purification regiment? Or did you decide to portray yourself in a character with my name?
Since you have unprocessed feelings toward me, I highly recommend you stop using my username for any of your characters. Otherwise, there will be consequences, unpleasant ones.
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Stormblood said:
What the Hell even is your problem? I have never portrayed you in any negative light. Just a comedic relief. No different then any of other chapters.
You had no problem with it before.
Also, get for real, realize whom you are threatening. I know you think you can Bind and do things to other Satanist, but I have protection from Hell. You are welcome to Learn what that means. Others who have threatened me, needed to learn that the hard way. So its however you wanna do this.
Perhaps being mature and just asking me. Or is it that asking too much from you?
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Stormblood said:
Ehh? I'm not following what happened. I thought you guys were ok with each other. Did something happen?! I bloody swear if that's the case when this war on this Earth is finalized and we are victorious, I'm tying you both up and leaving you two in each other's company for two hours. If you resist I'm recruiting Fancy Nancy or Ol Argedco Luciftius to help me.
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Ramier108666 said:
It's simple all it takes is to read the two chapters and see how the character with my name is portrayed. He's going overboard with his repressed dislike of me and portraying my namesake as the village fool.
A character in a tale with my name portrayed that way... this is a psychological tactic, whether he is aware of it not, where you use a character as a proxy to make fun of them and, since tales appeal to the right hemisphere of the brain, this creates subconscious ties that will arouse the same preconceptions/prejudices that is building toward that character whenever someone reads my username. Sounds familiar?
This is defamation. Now, while some people here may respect me and everyone who has read me for some time already has formed an opinion of me, for better or worse (or neutral), newcomers still have a clean slate. You understand what that means, right?
This kind of behaviour will not be tolerated. If persistent, it will be taken care of.
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Stormblood said:
Did you just threaten another SS over a character in a story. It's no secret you two have had "differences" in the past, and even if you don't agree with the way he's portraying you, what you just did is ludicrous.
Get a sense of humor/and or grow up.
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Stormblood said:
He had HP Mageson trip on some books and fall in a comic manner...do you see HP mageson making threats of retribution over this? No, because it's a story.
You're acting like a child.
I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and attribute this to the quarantine in Italy and you maybe going a bit bonkers...
Aldrick can be weird, mean, a button-pusher, etc. But he can also be kind, hard working, insightful, etc.
Take it in stride for fuck's sake.
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Looks like Mancy's kind of job :lol:Ramier108666 said:
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Silent Sword said:
Since you don't get there on your own, read my answer to Ramier.
Also, HP Mageson didn't get portrayed as the village fool.
Silent Sword said:
Remember, this is not kindergarten and neither a New Agey, politically-correct venue. If you don't understand what's going on, you should abstain from getting involved. In other words, shut up and mind your business, as this doesn't concern you. This is between me, Aldrick and the Gods, if he doesn't clean up his act.
It explains why I'm not getting much bored when I read.Ol argedco luciftias said:I was wondering why it just got easier to learn more things.Aldrick said:Ol argedco luciftias said:Sounds good
Mercury is 0 Degrees Taurus now. Doesnt that feel alot better? I suddenly can think and concentrate. I dont feel like biting peoples head off over nothing. I can see myself writing some more. Instead of just thinking of writing and going Into mental lock down. Grabbing my head and then destroying the laptop.
Its...silent. That's nicccee.
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Stormblood said:
Actually I did notice that Stormblood. I don't think that was wise nor really mature. He kinda called me a source of betrayal as how Scorpio is. I found it strange and a bit insultive.
I do apologise for saying I'll tie you and him up and keep you together. Realising this, I will bet I'll come back and you'll be trying to beat his ass.
Defamation is defamation, whether he's going to accept or not, I do think his over stimulation of his RTR is making him a bit overwhelmingly erratic.
