OuroborphicMystery
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I would like to issue an apology regarding a couple of the "corrections" I suggested. I hadn't done the ritual prior to posting this, and a few things turned out to be different in vocal practice as opposed to theory. As well, I was rushing to get ready to do the Ritual on time, and a couple of things slipped through the cracks.[TL;DR at the bottom]
Our dear High Priest,
I am simply exuberant with this new Ritual. It also feels, even from merely reading it, like it's going to be among the most important of all the Rituals we do, if not the most important. Furthermore, for your viewing, I am sharing a proofreading of this most important ritual, with some small, suggested changes. Absolutely no "change" in wording, intention or anything else is meant by this word, since I could not even begin to make changes to literally divinely-inspired rituals. Please see it as a mere spellcheck.
I feel bashful in uploading this file. I only gathered the face to do this because I know my burning, searing love for the Gods and my desire for serving Them and the quest for perfection (especially in Their Name) is easily dwarfed by yours by the sheer weight of your unending service. Please know that I otherwise abhor doing this kind of work if it means stepping on the toes of anyone, let alone my superiors, but I do this because the Gods deserve nothing even slightly shy of perfection. I am also loathe to give you extra work but in this situation of doing quality control in the Name of Father Zeus, I think it's more than worth it.
If nothing else, I think you know I have some gift in the command of language (especially English), and I hope that this at least merits you or a beloved Guardian looking at the file I am uploading.
At the very bottom of the file, you will see a Legend for the 3 colors I used in the small edits I suggested, since I was not daring enough to think I simply wholesale knew better purely on account of having a good grasp over English. I am also not spiritually dead though, so I avoided any superfluous changes I felt are intentionally worded in a certain way for spiritual reasons.
Please double-check my double-check and should you see it fit in your wisdom, apply any, some, none or all of the changes I recommended.
With my most respectful regards.
TL;DR I uploaded spellcheck, please don't smite, thanks.
P.S. I have a question. Towards and at the end, we vibrate IAOE, and the pronunciation that's offered for both I and E are the exact same - is this intentional? I feel like the E may be vibrated as the "A" in "Anger" or the E at the end of the old Suryae mantra. It also would make sense since they are different letters. But of course, you'd know best.
No part of this question factors into the file I uploaded, this is completely separate.
It seems no harm is done, as Clergy is obviously hard at work and clarified a lot of things after the ritual was posted. If, despite a few errors as well, I have also been able to be beneficial at all to the improvement of the page in the slightest, then I will count myself honored. If not even that, well, there are far worse things to have "wasted" time on.
I will make sure to be even more thorough if I attempt such a stunt again.
Finally, actually doing the Ritual put a lot of things (as well as the Ritual itself) into perspective.
See this as a small Testimonial: If you are a Zevist, you must do this ritual. It's honestly stupendous and beyond all description. We are once again blessed by the literally divine vision of Clergy, and the Gods who through them reach us in very palpable ways. Again and again I tell you, dear Family, please do this ritual as soon as you can, and every single day you can (don't push yourselves too hard and fry yourselves though) and connect deeper, stronger, better to Father. You will absolutely love every single day of this Schedule.
Love to all.