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A Poem for Satan and All

Sungio13

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The I, the self, the you and the all
The low, the depth, the high and the tall.
You teach, you show, you permeate in all truth
The beauty of Nature, and with your words you sooth.

Both humbly and proudly we connect to your world
Sparking our souls with life and like lighting, you hurled.
You planted us on Earth, and as seeds we grow
Sprouting deeper and higher, you've perfectly graced us to sow.

We now observe, we now listen and then we now know
The Sun, The Moon, The Grass and The Snow.
The Warmth, the Cold, the Fresh and the Dry
The Soul, The Spirit, The Meaning of our 3rd Eye.

With knowledge, in all things we see you
With movement, we see ourselves and the number 2.
So let us begin to salute you with this,
Your animals are here, and bring instant bliss.

Let's start with the Raven, the mysterious and fateful one
Who says, "Let's look at the face of the Black Sun."
We move on to the Goat, the triumphant mountain climber,
Who says, "Impossible is naught, it has run out of its timer."

The Serpent, the wise, the revealer of all secrets,
Then now says, "Knowledge is all around us, for those who seek it."
Gracefully upon a Mountain, the Peacock spreads her wings
"My beauty is in my being, I married my soul with a ring."

Finally the Dragon now rises, the Serpent ascended,
And he Fires! "The Beauty of Satan, has now been presented!"
The Children of Earth, the Man and the Maiden,
We feel, we have, we are.. The Joy of Satan!

Happy Yule Everyone! :)
 
Wow this is an amazing poem. I love the reference to raising the kundalini. Very nicely done. Congratulations. :D
 
Very nice poem!

However, "maiden" is a young girl before marriage and motherhood. I didn't want to give any criticism but the very founder of the JoS was married and a mother, and not young.
 
Rroco88 said:
Wow this is an amazing poem. I love the reference to raising the kundalini. Very nicely done. Congratulations. :D

Hey! I appreciate the feedback, choosing the order of his animals was very intentional especially the Dragon for the end. :)

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Very nice poem!

However, "maiden" is a young girl before marriage and motherhood. I didn't want to give any criticism but the very founder of the JoS was married and a mother, and not young.

I know, in good faith what I really wanted to express was simply "man and woman," but it was a little tricky to rhyme with Father's name. Especially with the double couplet sequence I was using for this poem.

I appreciate the criticism and the feedback though, maybe I can practice other styles of poetry to help me express differently and more freely. :)
 
lovely poem :)
 
Sungio13 said:
I know, in good faith what I really wanted to express was simply "man and woman," but it was a little tricky to rhyme with Father's name. Especially with the double couplet sequence I was using for this poem.
That's what I figured. You did a great job with the rhyming :)
 
It's beautiful! I especially like how that rhymes. :)
 
Sungio13 said:
Rroco88 said:
Wow this is an amazing poem. I love the reference to raising the kundalini. Very nicely done. Congratulations. :D

Hey! I appreciate the feedback, choosing the order of his animals was very intentional especially the Dragon for the end. :)
I could tell. You did a great job with it. It is always a pleasure for me to enjoy the art of other satanists, hence I took my time to read and re-read your poem as I was going through it. Congrats once again. :)
 
Sungio13 said:
The Serpent, the wise, the revealer of all secrets,
Then now says, "Knowledge is all around us, for those who seek it."
Gracefully upon a Mountain, the Peacock spreads her wings
"My beauty is in my being, I married my soul with a ring."

Finally the Dragon now rises, the Serpent ascended,
And he Fires! "The Beauty of Satan, has now been presented!"
The Children of Earth, the Man and the Maiden,
We feel, we have, we are.. The Joy of Satan!

My favourite part of this beautiful poem. Astounding work!
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Satan

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