Aphrodite

[Dragon fire]

O Goddess Aphrodite most beautiful
Goddess of many name's since
Ancient times your guidance of
Love is in my heart you are a
Gorgeous Goddess raised from the
Sea Goddess of Venus and tester
Of love you a blessing to know
May your blessings be shine
In the Temple of Zeus and the Gods
May your light And presence Always
Be With us! !!!

 

[Symmachos-ZEUS/SHAITAN]

O Goddess Aphrodite most beautiful
Goddess of many name's since
Ancient times your guidance of
Love is in my heart you are a
Gorgeous Goddess raised from the
Sea Goddess of Venus and tester
Of love you a blessing to know
May your blessings be shine
In the Temple of Zeus and the Gods
May your light And presence Always
Be With us! !!!View attachment 6226

What wonderful writing!!! The forms of Poetry practice a lot of the writing I was telling you about!
Also you know, I also really liked the content of what you wrote. Maybe I am a little biased because Aphrodite is the Goddess who follows me, but it is really beautiful what you wrote

In my opinion for an even better work you should focus on 1) Punctuation 2) Use of spacing (including going over with the line). I have a wonderful international grammar manual (which is good with most languages that use the letters of the Latin alphabet). If you want I'll pass on the title. It is a very short, easy-to-read manual, but it is REALLY good for learning every aspect of grammar. All-inclusive and it's also cheap

THE MANUAL IS THIS:

https://www.amazon.it/Writing-Well-Classic-Guide-Nonfiction/dp/0060891548/ref=mp_s_a_1_3?dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9._OjwsooYqQxP1owjjWvAqme2Y-sXBy-1ujXPInFMJR0cL77X0P_YC3sNtCjuFTmETphHxGRjTSOrDRjGRs5hFKPV7Fqs1bERJzmL7vdww3erXigdsvvV_rVcsYHb658gOhaWXW-iaPqj44bjMT_QJtnutZ3E7HaWdHjP2Wf2EHspTpoMcvCXee_PQ0FEw9DB5CuH6Iida_TPfBBHI4lf4w.Jm_xeQZVKljQ2uu9J0PBDs4s_9uSp-fH6DZWq_Rv6Bo&dib_tag=se&qid=1741275069&refinements=p_27%3AWilliam+Zinsser&s=books&sr=1-3

I also have others in my "writing, literature and poetic" section in my personal library. But that should be enough. If you want a book on metrics however I can consult if I have any interesting titles in the dedicated shelf (although the metrics I have studied is Italian metrics).

 

[Dragon fire]

Thanks for the advice
Sometimes I don't have problems
With my writing in the past
But I think I need to do is take my
Time and go for it I get excited
When I write it's the come into
My mind as a Inspiration from
The inside . Thanks for being there
For me as a friend I appreciate your
advice may the Gods smile upon
You !
Hail Zeus and Satya and the Gods! !!!

Lol I did it again
Thanks for the advice
Sometimes times I don't have problems with my writing in the past
But I think I need to take my time
And check over it and go over it
The words come into my mind
As a Inspiration from The inside
Thanks again for being there
As a friend may the Gods smile upon You
Hail Zues and the Gods! !!

 

[Dragon fire]

What wonderful writing!!! The forms of Poetry practice a lot of the writing I was telling you about!
Also you know, I also really liked the content of what you wrote. Maybe I am a little biased because Aphrodite is the Goddess who follows me, but it is really beautiful what you wrote

In my opinion for an even better work you should focus on 1) Punctuation 2) Use of spacing (including going over with the line). I have a wonderful international grammar manual (which is good with most languages that use the letters of the Latin alphabet). If you want I'll pass on the title. It is a very short, easy-to-read manual, but it is REALLY good for learning every aspect of grammar. All-inclusive and it's also cheap

THE MANUAL IS THIS:

https://www.amazon.it/Writing-Well-Classic-Guide-Nonfiction/dp/0060891548/ref=mp_s_a_1_3?dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9._OjwsooYqQxP1owjjWvAqme2Y-sXBy-1ujXPInFMJR0cL77X0P_YC3sNtCjuFTmETphHxGRjTSOrDRjGRs5hFKPV7Fqs1bERJzmL7vdww3erXigdsvvV_rVcsYHb658gOhaWXW-iaPqj44bjMT_QJtnutZ3E7HaWdHjP2Wf2EHspTpoMcvCXee_PQ0FEw9DB5CuH6Iida_TPfBBHI4lf4w.Jm_xeQZVKljQ2uu9J0PBDs4s_9uSp-fH6DZWq_Rv6Bo&dib_tag=se&qid=1741275069&refinements=p_27%3AWilliam+Zinsser&s=books&sr=1-3

I also have others in my "writing, literature and poetic" section in my personal library. But that should be enough. If you want a book on metrics however I can consult if I have any interesting titles in the dedicated shelf (although the metrics I have studied is Italian metrics).

Can I be your student to learn
A better

 

[Symmachos-ZEUS/SHAITAN]

Can I be your student to learn
A better

Lol my section "education, teaching and learning disorders" would be done on purpose hahaha

But no. If you read that manual and then start practicing in your writings (whatsapp or even just keeping a personal journal of your meditative progress), you won't need me.

Absolutely. In fact, I'll tell you more. There are specific Deities who are much better at teaching you certain things than I am. Why, since you are exploring the website, don't you go to the GODS section and in the list of GODS don't you look for PHENEX (at letter P in the list of course)?

However, make short and simple sentences while writing. Long sentences are not synonymous with skill. If you put on a ton of makeup, you are not synonymous with "pretty girl."

 

[Dragon fire]

Lol my section "education, teaching and learning disorders" would be done on purpose hahaha

But no. If you read that manual and then start practicing in your writings (whatsapp or even just keeping a personal journal of your meditative progress), you won't need me.

Absolutely. In fact, I'll tell you more. There are specific Deities who are much better at teaching you certain things than I am. Why, since you are exploring the website, don't you go to the GODS section and in the list of GODS don't you look for PHENEX (at letter P in the list of course)?

However, make short and simple sentences while writing. Long sentences are not synonymous with skill. If you put on a ton of makeup, you are not synonymous with "pretty girl."

Ok I'll read it
Thanks for everything
Have a blessed day

 

[Tethys333]

O Goddess Aphrodite most beautiful
Goddess of many name's since
Ancient times your guidance of
Love is in my heart you are a
Gorgeous Goddess raised from the
Sea Goddess of Venus and tester
Of love you a blessing to know
May your blessings be shine
In the Temple of Zeus and the Gods
May your light And presence Always
Be With us! !!!View attachment 6226

Is a beautiful poem! Really! You use a particular metric. For example Homer often resorted to hexameter. Iambic meters were also common in ancient Greece; Hipponax and Archilocus used them in their comedies, tragedies and dialogues.

You should research this; you have so much potential. Very good!

 

[Dragon fire]

Is a beautiful poem! Really! You use a particular metric. For example Homer often resorted to hexameter. Iambic meters were also common in ancient Greece; Hipponax and Archilocus used them in their comedies, tragedies and dialogues.

You should research this; you have so much potential. Very good!

Thanks I will study more
And thanks for your. Kind words

 

[Symmachos-ZEUS/SHAITAN]

Ok I'll read it
Thanks for everything
Have a blessed day

For example, this post was grammatically perfect and is a good start. You just forgot the period at the end of sentences. But it was grammatically very good and you should start from that.

 

[Dragon fire]

For example, this post was grammatically perfect and is a good start. You just forgot the period at the end of sentences. But it was grammatically very good and you should start from that.

thanks I will.
I appreciate you!!
Hail Zues and the Gods !!!!
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